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Dec 18, 2017 10:26:35 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 18, 2017 10:26:35 GMT -5
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Dec 17, 2017 0:52:23 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 17, 2017 0:52:23 GMT -5
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Dec 17, 2017 0:38:41 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 17, 2017 0:38:41 GMT -5
change the Jinchuriki skill rank to E as that is where all kkg/hiden/jin skill ranks start (the description is fine for an E rank)
Delete the SA slots
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Dec 16, 2017 20:59:12 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 16, 2017 20:59:12 GMT -5
Please add in max lengths for the vacuum blade as well as IC descriptions on the damage increase like is it powerful enough to completely destroy d rank defenses etc etc
Add a range for the gale as well as an ic description of the power and destructive force behind it like what happens when it hits a d rank defense or a random structure like a building
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Dec 16, 2017 20:54:15 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 16, 2017 20:54:15 GMT -5
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Dec 15, 2017 14:17:37 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 15, 2017 14:17:37 GMT -5
Face claims.
0-9,A, B, C, D, & E Assassin's Creed, Connor kenway as RedSERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character nameF, G, H, I, J, & K SERIES, face claim name as character name SERIES, face claim name as character name SERIES, face claim name as character name
L, M, N, O, P, & Q SERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character nameR, S, T, U, & V SERIES, face claim name as character name SERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character nameW, X, Y, & Z Warriors Orochi 3, Shuten Doji as Shuten DojiSERIES, face claim name as character nameSERIES, face claim name as character name
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Dec 15, 2017 12:26:46 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 15, 2017 12:26:46 GMT -5
Deadly Darts I would say this jutsu could be D rank also if the damage exceeds basic swords slashes and/or stabs please make an ic description of the damage of the jutsu (I would recommend using the basic damage for C ranked offensive buki or D rank if you wish to lower the rank) also mention how fast the traveling sword can move (is it thrown kunai speed or faster or dependent of the throwing power of the user) also I would like an IC description of how the jutsu stacks up against defensive jutsu of the same or lesser rank.
Kenbu This jutsu can be D ranked if you choose if not you can leave it as is
Watermelon Splitting What makes this different from a freeform two handed overhead slash
Tornado Whirlwind Leg Describe the IC damage done when the attack hits also as with any combo know that this jutsu can be stopped at any point during the combo which could in turn negate a large part of your post when using said combo jutsu
Tiger Knee Same as Whirlwind Leg
Machingun Blow Same
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Dec 15, 2017 11:22:51 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 15, 2017 11:22:51 GMT -5
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Dec 15, 2017 11:04:20 GMT -5
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Dec 15, 2017 10:59:18 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 15, 2017 10:59:18 GMT -5
For rock fist add in ic description of damage as well as its defensive ability
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Dec 11, 2017 19:09:38 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 11, 2017 19:09:38 GMT -5
Using gentle fist without byakugan wouldn't do more damage to organs than with the byakugan
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Dec 11, 2017 19:06:55 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Dec 11, 2017 19:06:55 GMT -5
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Nov 25, 2017 14:51:30 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Nov 25, 2017 14:51:30 GMT -5
for size I need the size of the actual sword not including the chakra aura
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Nov 25, 2017 14:44:08 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Nov 25, 2017 14:44:08 GMT -5
For the enhanced durability I would like to see IC parameters about the beating it could take before breaking the same for the Sharp Edge I would like to know the IC parameters for what it could actually cut through.
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Nov 25, 2017 14:40:21 GMT -5
Post by The Problem on Nov 25, 2017 14:40:21 GMT -5
Hiramekarei Unwrapping wouldn't be a jutsu its literally one of the abilities of the sword
Dead Fish Bone Rain would need to be split into different jutsu of different ranks with different chakra usage as adding more chakra and projectiles not only makes the jutsu harder to use but will also increase the damage output which would make them different ranks depending on the amount chakra used and damage.
In general what exactly do you mean when you talk about these stages, like increasing damage by one stage.
In general for each jutsu using the projectiles please state how many projectiles it creates and the damage it can do otherwise it will be assumed as one projectile and the base amount of damage that a jutsu of that rank can do. Also give a rough estimate for the size of the projectiles as well as a distance the projectiles can travel.
Branching Dead Fish Bone what happens if it doesn't pierce anything will it not explode or will it still explode, how many pieces does it explode into, does the explosion itself cause damage to those surrounding it or who have been hit by the projectile things like that.
Hiramekarei: Hakuteiken I have no idea what is happening with this it seems like a basic reinforcement using chakra but its confusing as you say the aura disappears but it also takes the form of a bird and that the ability to mould the aura is gone but if that were true it would not be able to take the form of a bird. Also I need IC parameters for how destructive and durable it is as comparing it to Kusanagi doesn't tell me much as Kusanagi is not registered on the site.
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