[Niwa Hōseki]

Restricted (Hiramekarei required)

Dead Fish Bone Rain

Rank D	Specialization Buki	Element -
Chakra Usage Very Low-Very High	Range Personal	# of Handseals -

Description

A technique used along side the Dead Fish Bone ability, the user adds a bit more chakra to the stores of the blade to increase the number of senbon. This jutsu adds ten more senbon for every rank of chakra payment used, with very low being one rank and very high being five ranks.

Dead Fish Bone Reinforcement

Rank C	Specialization Buki	Element -
Chakra Usage Low	Range Personal	# of Handseals -

Description

The user increases the density of the senbon created through Dead Fish Bone. This increases the deadliness of the senbon by one stage.

Dead Fish Bone Drill

Rank B	Specialization Buki	Element -
Chakra Usage Medium	Range Personal	# of Handseals -

Description

Similar to the ten finger drilling bullets of the Kaguya Clan, the user adds a spin to the senbon when they are fired from Hiramekarei. This increases their deadliness by two stages.

Branching Dead Fish Bone

Rank A	Specialization Buki	Element -
Chakra Usage Low	Range Personal	# of Handseals -

Description

The user places a small bubble of chakra into the senbon fired from Hiramekarei using its Dead Fish Bone ability. These Senbon, once they hit an object, will branch out chaotically and quickly to skewer anything within three meters. This will also result in several spikes impaling the hit object from the inside out, assuming they have the strength to pierce it.

Hiramekarei: Hakuteiken

Rank S	Specialization Buki	Element -
Chakra Usage Very High	Range Personal	# of Handseals -

Description

Few have seen this form of Hiramekarei, and none have lived. The user, after paying the chakra cost to increase the chakra shroud to a size four times that of the original blade, and then forces it down into the blade to the point where the shroud no longer exists outside of the it. While this removes the ability to mold the shroud, this focuses all the power of that chakra into Hiramekarei itself. The blade appears bright white, and its aura takes the form of a bird, earning it the name Hakuteiken. A single blow form this form can an unarmored opponent, and can cleave through barriers and other weapons with ease. It also becomes unrivaled in durability, said to be able to clash with the legendary Kusanagi.

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[The Problem]

Hiramekarei Unwrapping wouldn't be a jutsu its literally one of the abilities of the sword

Dead Fish Bone Rain would need to be split into different jutsu of different ranks with different chakra usage as adding more chakra and projectiles not only makes the jutsu harder to use but will also increase the damage output which would make them different ranks depending on the amount chakra used and damage.

In general what exactly do you mean when you talk about these stages, like increasing damage by one stage.

In general for each jutsu using the projectiles please state how many projectiles it creates and the damage it can do otherwise it will be assumed as one projectile and the base amount of damage that a jutsu of that rank can do. Also give a rough estimate for the size of the projectiles as well as a distance the projectiles can travel.

Branching Dead Fish Bone what happens if it doesn't pierce anything will it not explode or will it still explode, how many pieces does it explode into, does the explosion itself cause damage to those surrounding it or who have been hit by the projectile things like that.

Hiramekarei: Hakuteiken I have no idea what is happening with this it seems like a basic reinforcement using chakra but its confusing as you say the aura disappears but it also takes the form of a bird and that the ability to mould the aura is gone but if that were true it would not be able to take the form of a bird. Also I need IC parameters for how destructive and durable it is as comparing it to Kusanagi doesn't tell me much as Kusanagi is not registered on the site.